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Is this a good idea for a short story?

I'm planning to write a dark comedic story about a houseful of naive old women who see a man in a raincoat outside and believe the Grim Reaper has come for them. What do you think?

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  1. sure why not
  2. Ill buy it
  3. KEWLIO!!!!!!! JUST GIVE ME UR NAME AND THE TITLE AND ILL DEFINETLY BUY IT!
  4. It sounds really good. You should definently write it
  5. eh, sounds pretty good to me.
  6. lol sounds good to me. can't wait to read it.
  7. sounds good....no great......id buy it for sure
  8. that could be funny--- as a final gag, he should be there to flash them
  9. She sounds a little paranoid, but i might actually work. If it turns out it a sucky idea, you'll just move on to something better and that will be that.
  10. That sounds reallly interesting, you should make the man be a prince charming for one of the not so naive women. I'll read it!
  11. That sounds really cool! I my self am a writer and have written 4 books. Trust me, go with it! It could be a great story!
  12. Oh that sounds really good. I hope all the women have extreme personalities.
  13. yea
  14. sounds good, i hope your a good writer 'cause theres a LOT of potential there. Happy writing.
  15. Reminds me of a mix of the Golden Girls, Billy and Mandy and I know what you did last summer
  16. It's a good start... go for it. You could have a lot of fun with that one.
  17. it's a pretty good idea --> very unique, i would probably check it out..
  18. it has potential to be really good, but it all depends on your writing skills on how good it will really be
  19. Could be hilarous if it's X-Rated.
  20. great idea
  21. Sounds good to me! Good Luck!
  22. Sounds good to me.
  23. awesome
  24. ok, how far do you think this story can go?.... ok wait your right. short story... go for it.
  25. a old woman go to his mother house ,she meetes so many is th guding for u
  26. with some foreshadowing and suspense.. ohhh it could be great!
  27. I should say so, but it might get a little comical, not sure if thats what your going for but I'd read it
  28. lol sure.
  29. OH YES that story would make the headlines.
  30. as long as we can feel empathy for the characters and their situation it should be good
  31. nice idea.. i'll go watch the movie.. mmm.. or rent it for that matter... if it becomes a movie
  32. It has possibilities. What if it really IS the grim reaper? What if he really isn't all that grim, but has a wonderful sense of humor and is charming? What if he makes their last few moments on earth one of beauty and grace? Hmmmm.......You had better write it quick or I might cop it for myself.
  33. Yes, but try twisting the plot a little.. like the women think the guy is the grim reaper.. but actually the grim reaper could turn out to be one of the naive women.
  34. Sounds good. I prefer fairytales myself, but i'd probably take a look. Looks like a gripping but funny story.
  35. Maybe as a play. Not as a book or short story.
  36. Sounds like a good story-line to me!
  37. When you are done, send it to me, I would like to read it. Oh and to answer your question, it sounds good.
  38. yes then they could discover he is the Grime Reaper and ask him in to clean there house
  39. GO 4 IT ID READ IR
  40. Yes that's a good idea. Good luck with it.
  41. what is there to think? you say it is a story to be written by you and to be read by you. it is to say ignorance and shows your innocense.
  42. Very good idea but it has a familiar ring to it. I believe I saw a movie based on this premise. Be careful & ensure that you do not plagerise another author.
  43. I'd read it. Make a good twist at the end, like; They convince themselves he isn't but he ends up actually being a reaper or the text makes him seem like one and they kill him and he ends up being one of their sons (just a regular person.) Good luck with it.
  44. I think by the time someone has reached old age they may have encountered a raincoat. As a matter of fact they probably own a raincoat. You may want to go with older people that have diminished eyesight and think they see the grim reaper.
  45. I suggest you complicate the plot with failing memories...which can add both comedy and melodrama. Also add a trip down memory lane, to tell each other the stories attatched to their photos and things, so their story will "continue in the others", if he is there for her! these two additives could make a complete novel, or a nice TV movie.
  46. sounds really good and original. i will buy it.
  47. I would read it, sounds interesting.
  48. Definitely. May I read it when you are done?
  49. Grim Peeper, you say? Certainly, it would have appeal on the fringes.
  50. wow! sounds great, tell me how it ends (haha)
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